Look at the following sentence from one of my task 1 answers:
A dramatic increase in both commodity prices was seen from 2007 to 2008, with oil prices reaching a peak of approximately $130 per barrel and the food price index rising to 220 points.
Notice how this sentence is written: first I state the overall trend, then there is a comma, then I add the statistics using "with + ing".
See if you can write a similar sentence using the information below.
- The number of young people who attended UK universities rose (2006 to 2015)
- Female university entrants: an increase of 20,000 over the 9-year period
- Male university entrants: peaked at 157,000 in 2011
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