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IELTS Writing Task 1: 'fish pie' sentence

 In last Thursday's lesson I asked you to suggest where we could add one extra detail to my 'fish pie' answer. I had forgotten to write that the pie is in a microwaveable container.

People suggested two sensible places to add this detail.

1) At the beginning of paragraph 2:

The fish pie contains salmon, peas, sauce and potatoes in a microwaveable container.

2) In the last sentence of paragraph 4:

The resulting fish pies are placed in microwaveable containers, wrapped, frozen and then stored or dispatched.

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