Can you correct, change or improve the following sentences?
- Overall, at first, in the year of 2000, average daily spending of business visitors was the highest and the peak point.
- And the spending trend divided into three different categories.
- Overall, all three categories showed fluctuation trend.
- Between 2000 and 2010 precisely at the middle it was just a slight different between the business and the holiday categories.
- Visiting friend or relatives is considered to be the least amount of expenses people spend on.
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