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IELTS Writing Actual Test: Map + Work


The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Sample answer :

The two maps illustrate how Grange park have been changed from the opening in 1920 to the present.

As can be seen from the pictures, the park has been dramatically transformed after the constructions of several entertainment facilities over the given period.

In 1920, visitors could enter the park from the Northern or Southern entrance on Arnold avenue or Eldon street, but now they can get in by a new entrance from the underground car park. There were a fountain located at the center of the park and a large stage for musicians on the left-hand side of the fountain, but now both have been replaced by a huge rose garden surrounded by many seats and a large amphitheater for concerts.

Looking at the first picture, the stage was midway between two rose gardens, with many seats placed next to them. There was another rose garden to the east of the Northern entry, but it has been converted into a cafe. Also, a pond for water plants on the top right-hand corner and a glasshouse on the bottom one have been flattened to make room for a children’s play area and a water feature.


Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Sample answer :

In recent years, there has been a growing tendency towards self-employment all over the world. In this essay, I will analyze some main reasons for this trend, as well as examine its drawbacks.

One of the reasons that could explain why more people are choosing to be self-employed nowadays is that most people believe that entrepreneurs are likely to have better income potential. It is true that traditionally employed workers usually receive fixed salaries for their positions while self-employed individuals can gain higher income upon the development of their business. Another possible reason is the flexibility of deciding when and where to work. People who are self-employed can have more chances to set their own working hours and have the freedom to choose their workplace. As they can have control over their time, they will have more chances to cultivate other skills which benefit their personal growth.

On the other hand, self-employment brings about some negative aspects that should be taken into consideration. First of all, once people have become self-employed, they would receive unsteady pay and lack financial security. In fact, their income might experience fluctuations, depending on their workload and other expenses to run their business. Moreover, self-employment often requires extra working hours. Since people working for themselves handle many things ranging from marketing and sales to financial management and personnel administration, they have to work longer and more irregular hours than those who are not self-employed. Therefore, they will spend less time with family and friends, or have difficulty in achieving a healthy work-life balance.

In conclusion, being self-employed may have some certain merits in terms of earnings potential and working flexibility; however, the downsides of this trend should be considered carefully.

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