IELTS Writing Task 1: connecting related information

 When there's a strong relationship between the two charts (as below), it makes sense to connect the information in your 'details' paragraphs.

Let's try writing two sentences using the information that I've highlighted.

1) Connect the information highlighted in yellow:

Export earnings from petroleum products rose from around $61 billion in 2015 to $63 billion in 2016, which was an increase of 3%.

2) Connect the information highlighted in green:

There was a 15.24% increase in export revenue from textiles, with earnings rising from roughly $25 billion to over $30 billion.

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